The New and Re Developed Idea From The Feedback and Constructive Criticism
This is what our final Idea consist of. As u can see the narrative has been altered slightly but the main aspect tat we have changed coming from the feedback has been the structure. Both parts now link together by crossing over one another giving of the emotion of sadness and anger to the audience. It will also make the audience feel uncomfortable due to the soundscapes and shouting audio tracks being mixed into one. We will also make sure that the sequences get substantially faster and gain in content as well as speed.
There is also in the spider diagram the start of an Idea for camera shots that I am visualizing for the experimental film. The house hold appliances would look nice shot close up and then as we want to keep the identity of our character a secret until the end ex stream long shots / close ups could be used along with the sequences and montage of audio files.






