We presented the Idea to Dom and the class and overall they seemed impressed with the idea but there was a few room for improvement. One of the comments is that they just wanted more clarification of the narrative other than the war situation between Ukraine and Russia. So having looked back upon this in the next meeting we wanted the firing scene between Larry and his boss. We started with writing the script and seeing where we would get to in the story and having written the first scene we came across the boss scene that had been the topic in the crit session, We all decided it would be more effective if there was no sound of the dialogue in it but instead a ambient sound that would play over the top of the scene and this would be much more effective, the audience would understand what was going on as well as it being quite uncomfortable to watch or letting them feel emotion towards Larry.
Some of the positives that did come out of the session tho was this contradiction and juxta-position between the two stories and having one of them playing in the background as a news report we could create a whole different effect.
So just clearing up the narrative was the main point we got from the crit session as well as making the most of the chance we have to use the news story as an effective and emotional tool.
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