Having re-visited the idea and added to and improved the
soundtrack ad video we were optimistic going into the crit. Having shown the
film the cirt we got back was not what we expected and a few negatives came up.
However these negatives were based
around the same point within the film and aimed at the ending. So looking back
at the feedback we decided that we would change the ending by adding ore
sequences to the current timeline so by
the end all you see are flashes of the argument making it more believable and allowing
the audience to feel more emotion and tension. What was also suggested was to
make the egg timer more important by reflecting the time more as well as taking
out the voices of the argument at the end within the argument scene as the
class found it difficult to believe it positives however were that as a whole
the class really liked the film, they thought it built tension nicely and
understood the concept of the idea and what we were trying to accomplish. The
class liked the way it was filmed and the colour grades had put on while editing. The idea it was
shot using close ups was also a positive.
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